写作表达的换词技巧

写作表达的换词技巧　　01、摆脱 more than　　例句：There were more foreign tourists in the Maldives than locals.　　马尔代夫的游客比当地人更多。　　遇到比较级时，我们的第一反应往往是用 more than 或者 less than，怎么摆脱俗套呢?　　句子改进：Foreign tourists outnumbered the locals in the Maldives.　　解析：这里我们用 outnumber 表示 more than，除此以外我们还可以用 overtake，outweigh 这类的程度超出词在其他类型的句子中使用。　　02、摆脱 famous　　例句：Yao Ming is very famous among students all over the world.　　姚明在全球范围的学生中非常著名。　　famous 和 all over the world 在平时口语或者写作中，使用起来很方便，那么如何摆脱俗套，脱颖而出呢?　　改进：Yao Ming is a household name among students around the globe.　　解析：这里我们把 famous 用 “家喻户晓” (a household name) 的表达使原句更生动，并用 around the globe 代替 all over the world 的俗套。　　03、摆脱常用动词　　例句： Kobe Bryant walked into the stadium and prepared for the playoff.　　科比布莱恩特走入体育场，准备季后赛。　　改进：Kobe Bryant stormed into the stadium and warmed up for the playoff.　　解析：storm into：如暴风般冲入体育场，warm up 专指赛事或者练习的暖场。　　04、摆脱be动词+形容词　　例句： Offense and defense are quite important to a basketball player.　　进攻和防守对于一个篮球运动员来说十分重要。　　改进：Offense and defense are of central importance to a basketball player.　　解析：这里我们用 be动词+of+形容词的名词形式 (比如：is of importance，is of significance，is of help 去代替 is important, is significant, is helpful.)　　05、摆脱短语俗套　　例句： As we all know, height is very important for playing volleyball.　　众所周知，高度对于打排球是十分重要的。　　改进：It doesn’t surprise us to discover that height is of great importance for playing volleyball.　　解析：我们把开头部分用 it 形式主语连接 surprise，搭配 discover 后的宾语从句。乍听起来很复杂，其实只要记下：It doesn’t surprise us to discover that≈As we all know，即可。